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                                spider

                         pretty penny sherbet
                  lime-eyed and locked in orange
              how they laughed as all the porridge
                          pushed out windows
                             knocked in doors.
               and though some begged to get in
                  while the others wished for out
            there you were, sweet nosebleed ghost
                  . . . unwelcomed host without.
             so faeries made their mushroom rings
                where you danced in naked plight
            those points like sweet, creamed coffee
                    that patch of curled, red light.
              all these years the pot was emptied
                     but the honey bubbled still . . .
                when you asked to never hunger
                     you were eaten by your will.
©2003-2009 ~littleredelf
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a nursery rhyme
for after you leave
the nursery . . .


*stock from janina
*original image HERE
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Wow! That's disturbing.

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Wan should do his hair like that.
Great language play here! :D
I agree...but great job...
Very clever poem. I enjoy it a great deal. I always love it when someone uses real wit when they rhyme. so the poem plus the fabulous photo makes this a :+fav:

Keep up the good work sweetheart :heart:

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you are just amazing ^_^ :heart: very sweet poem and picture to go with it. reminds me of alice through the looking glass :clap:

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"Even after you do everything your told. Even after you've done everything you could. You would still be screwed over as a result of your own faults and flaws." -Kibby
oh crap...+fav keepem comin!

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Can't believe you've got me reading poetry! :D

Janina does look a little like a deranged Miss Muffet in this photo... ;) (Good selection)
This is very cool. Reminds me of somehting I was thinking the other day. :)

John
nicely done. cool poem and picture.

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romans chapter 10 verse 13
nice play on words. very fitting for the photo as well.

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